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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
Firstly, this is amazing. You've really captured the texture and colour of the can, and the top of the can really looks shiny. I also like how you have captured the essence of the ingredients list etc. without writing in every word.
One possible thing - I think the black line around the outside detracts slightly from the reality of the can, mainly because it goes around the entire outside. Maybe this could just be on the half more in shadow? There's also a little bit of a red mark in the tail of the second 'c'. It's not really a big deal, but it was big enough to notice.
So, for vision I gave you 4 stars because it's amazing, and I can see what you wanted to achieve in this drawing. Originality was a bit lower, simply because it seems more like a detailed study than anything. Technique is fantastic. Impact is also incredible, because it seems to be there - as I've said before, you really captured the can.
So overall, fantastic work, and I can't wait to see more!
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